How to Write a Congratulations Note
Posted by Judy on Mar 22nd 2022
Recognition makes the occasion even sweeter. Sending a few words of congratulation is like putting a little bit of sunshine in an envelope – it adds warmth to both business and personal relationships. Springtime brings natural opportunities to send good wishes for graduations and weddings, but there are many other occasions to send a congratulations note:
Business achievements: promotion, new job, new assignment, new title, starting a new business, getting a new contract or client, favorable publicity, industry award, retirement
Personal achievements: graduation, academic awards, scholarships, college acceptance, successful speech or publication, winning a sports competition, receiving a prize, winning an election, joining a professional society
Personal milestones: engagement, marriage, birth or adoption of child or grandchild, anniversary, baptism, circumcision, confirmation, Bar or Bat Mitzvah, new home.
Do
- Write soon after hearing the news
- Use the word “congratulations” early
- Mention the occasion for congratulations in the first sentence or two
- Tell the person how happy, proud or impressed you are
- If possible, relate something about the person's abilities and achievements
- If appropriate, tell how you learned about the news
- Express your best wishes for the person and for continued success
Don’t
- Tell the recipient he/she is lucky since it implies chance rather than achievement
- Use excessive flattery
- Compare the news to something you once did or heard about; let your recipient enjoy the moment
- Put a negative note into your message by using terms such as "you finally did it," "I'm so surprised," "you must have knocked yourself out."
The six elements of a basic congratulations note:
1.
Salutation People like to see their own names. |
III | Dear Mike, |
2. Offer congratulations early and mention the occasion |
Congratulations on your promotion to district manager | |
3. Tell how happy you are | I was thrilled when I heard the news! | |
4. If possible, relate something about the person's abilities | Ever
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5. Send wishes for continued success | Best of luck in your new position. I hope this is just the start of many more successes to come. | |
6. Close Any of the following are suitable for business:
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Sincerely, |